Writting

Writting

For our writing during term 1 and 2 we have been doing story writing, Narratives formal and Informal letter writing and planning. I think my planning and spelling has improved and have also lent to put “flesh” in our paragraphs and also learnt how to separate our the different events in the story this has helped because I sometimes put all three events in the same paragraphs and then the rest of the story didn’t make sents. I have learnt to do my plans with the plan man and editing to change spelling, sentences and rearrange words to make the story make senates. This is the first story I did in grade 6

and this is the last portal story I did in grade 6 so now you can see how much I have improved.

With our Andy grithes story we had to learn how to put on flesh which is to put 3 problems in our 3 paragraphs I enjoy doing this and this has helped me learn to write more interesting stories here is my Andy story.



Here is my holiday story.

Here is my letter to Smiths chips. Here is my solder letter. Here is my top 5 Here is my Adventure story